I've been compiling all of my sources into my works cited as I've gone along, now I've just got to work on beefing up my analysis and explanations. I feel as if my research paper would be more effective if I wasn't just limited to California, but could broaden it to the whole country. I believe it would make my argument all the more effective and really drive my message across if readers would realize that it isn't just locally that our educational systems are being affected, but the whole country as well.
But I suppose I'll just have to settle for including broader terms in my papers, and opt out for outside sources that stray outside the paper's criteria
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